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Ahhh!! So good!! I was thinking as I was reading this that the notable difference between your fic and so many other fics (of a variety of fandoms) that I've read, is that you seamlessly insert real-life into your stories. It's not just "he did this" or "she did that", you bring in images like the lost shoe at the airport, and it just makes the whole story so much more real. I know it takes time and thought to bring those bits in, but it makes the story so much richer. I love that about your writing.

Also, all the bits with Sam and Jack weren't bad either. ;-)

And THANK YOU for dealing with the Orlin bit...I so wanted to see how she reacted to that whole thing on the show, but as usual, we get NOTHING. I loved how you handled it.

There are so many other things I loved, I could blab on forever, but I'll refrain. This was wonderful, as always!