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posted by [identity profile] morjana.livejournal.com at 11:37am on 08/08/2010
The O'Neill Chronicles Book 1 Jack Retires, part 1 (which is the only part I've read and will read), is a well crafted story in regards to command of language, grammar and spellin.

However, it is a Mary Sue story (cough) -- the author has taken the character traits of Sam, Daniel and Teal'c and melded them into her own original character. And writes a Jack O'Neill I barely recognize.

Oh, well. We must winnow as we read.
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